Finally, the first post with material. First Draft: Chapter 1.

Since this is a new blog, especially dedicated to my first story… I figured I may as well supply links to my first drafts.

This is the beginning of my first draft of Merry-go-Round. The opening is still the same, somewhat, but there are quite a few major changes. The style, and the flow are just so much better. Along with the characters and the plot makes more sense. Anyhow, you can read it and compare it with my first chapter of the second draft.

Merry-Go-Round First Draft, Chapter One

~ by Garrick on July 1, 2008.