Continuing on… Here’s the second chapter of the second draft.

Here’s the second chapter of the second draft… And in regards to the first draft… I think it would be a better idea for me to post first draft chapters after the second draft reaches that part of the story. Wouldn’t want to spoil you guys who haven’t already read the story.

And… well, Chapter Two.

~ by Garrick on July 2, 2008.